That first line you quoted is one of my favorites in this piece.

I wish Driver's Ed included watching Chris give Toby a handjob.
It would definitely keep more people awake during the class.

I've developed a fondness for writing in the second person. It helps so much with slash (no pronoun confusion - yay!). Of course, now I have to check all my third-person pieces to make sure I don't slip up halfway through.

Thanks for all the comments! I'm really glad you liked it.