That first line you quoted is one of my favorites in this piece.
I wish Driver's Ed included watching Chris give Toby a handjob. It would definitely keep more people awake during the class.
I've developed a fondness for writing in the second person. It helps so much with slash (no pronoun confusion - yay!). Of course, now I have to check all my third-person pieces to make sure I don't slip up halfway through.
Thanks for all the comments! I'm really glad you liked it.
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Date: 2008-09-03 09:53 pm (UTC)I wish Driver's Ed included watching Chris give Toby a handjob.
It would definitely keep more people awake during the class.
I've developed a fondness for writing in the second person. It helps so much with slash (no pronoun confusion - yay!). Of course, now I have to check all my third-person pieces to make sure I don't slip up halfway through.
Thanks for all the comments! I'm really glad you liked it.