“Do you really hate him? Or do you hate that he's who Sullivan was pretending to be?” Sean's upset because Billy doesn't trust his judgment when it comes to who he chooses to be on his team.
“You're an asshole.” I love their version of pillow talk.
The last paragraph is another heartbreaker, but it's perfect for Billy's mood of the moment.
Poor baby isn't going to sleep well at all.
All in all, this is very well done, and very believable to the characters. I really think you can go ahead and post now if you wanted to. (Unless you want to add more Sophie - I'm always in favor of more Sophie)
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Date: 2008-10-08 04:36 am (UTC)Sean's upset because Billy doesn't trust his judgment when it comes to who he chooses to be on his team.
“You're an asshole.”
I love their version of pillow talk.
The last paragraph is another heartbreaker, but it's perfect for Billy's mood of the moment.
Poor baby isn't going to sleep well at all.
All in all, this is very well done, and very believable to the characters. I really think you can go ahead and post now if you wanted to. (Unless you want to add more Sophie - I'm always in favor of more Sophie)