I like your AU version, and I wish that it had actually happened that way in the movie. I'm not sure if you were asking for general feedback about it being OOC,but to me it was definitely in character. He does kill him in a premeditated fashion in the end.
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Date: 2007-10-21 10:45 pm (UTC)I'm not sure if you were asking for general feedback about it being OOC,but to me it was definitely in character. He does kill him in a premeditated fashion in the end.