That seems to hit the dynamic of most relationships, but if you're not happy with it, then you shouldn't go through with it. Keep the draft you've got now, but play with another where said scene happens differently.
Or is it a scene that you secretly love, think is great, and are just worried that your readers aren't going to like it?
And if that's the case, could it be any more wrong than what Monahan did to Billy when the elevator doors opened?
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Date: 2008-10-08 02:29 am (UTC)Or is it a scene that you secretly love, think is great, and are just worried that your readers aren't going to like it?
And if that's the case, could it be any more wrong than what Monahan did to Billy when the elevator doors opened?