Actually when I re-read the beginning part it didn't seem too saccharine at all, so it might stay fairly well intact. I have a heckuva lot of editing to do before any of it sees the light of day though - 35 pages so far, nearing 6000 words, mostly dialogue, and I still haven't reached the end (I'm hopeful it'll make sense in context with canon - I'm doing some strange things with time to make it work.) But I want to start posting it before NaNo starts, cause that's going to take up a chunk of time.
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Date: 2009-10-09 12:25 am (UTC)