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For the flash prompt "goldfish" at [livejournal.com profile] 1_million_words
Pre-series & Season 5
Rated G


For her fourth birthday, Toby and Genevieve had purchased a goldfish for Holly. The little girl would sit for hours watching her pet swim around in a tank that held less than a gallon of water. She’d given it the very original name of “Goldie”. Every day she would ask him questions about the fish.

“Do you think Goldie likes her tank?”

“I think she thinks it’s the best tank in the world.”

“Can we get her a friend?”

“I don’t know, Holly. Some fish don’t play well with others.”

“I think she might be lonely.”

“She has her bestest friend in the world.”

“Who’s that?”

“You, silly.”

“Yes. I just wish I could touch her and play with her.”

“That would hurt her, sweetheart.”

“Can I give her a little more food?”

“Just a pinch. You’ve got to ration out the food. Not too much. Not too little.”

“Do you think it tastes good?”

“Maybe to Goldie, but not to us.”

Then, one day, Holly started screaming and wouldn’t stop. Toby ran to her side. “What’s wrong?”

He followed her gaze and saw that the fish tank was empty.

“Where’s Goldie?”

“I just wanted to… for just a minute…” Holly said between sobs. She uncurled her hand and in it was the fish.

“Oh,” said Toby. “Can I see?” He took the fish and put it in the bowl. It rose immediately to the top of the tank. He sat with his daughter and had a long talk with her about life and death. He had her decorate a small box. They placed Goldie in it and buried her in the backyard.

He hadn’t thought about that for years, but now, on the eve of his parole, after five years in this fishbowl called Oz, he wondered how he would fare. Could he survive taking his first breaths of freedom or would he go belly up?

Date: 2019-08-03 10:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] severina2001.livejournal.com
Oh wow, I love this take on the prompt!

Date: 2019-08-03 09:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asphaltcowgrrl.livejournal.com
Aw, that's both sweet and sad! Great fill, thanks!

Date: 2019-08-05 06:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asphaltcowgrrl.livejournal.com
Happens to the best of us! But sometimes it needs to be done. :)

Date: 2019-08-21 06:20 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] vanillalime
Oh my, that last line! So, so good. I love Toby and Holly stories (obviously, as I've written enough of them), and it was wonderful to see you do a take on them.

(And, my goodness, what a lot of Oz you've been writing lately! So nice to see!)

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