Prequel drabble

[cmk418]

I was going to post this on hardtime100 as a response to challenge #113, but after re-reading the topic, I thought it didn't really fit. This, though will be a companion piece to what I eventually write for the Flashfic challenge (same scenario, but Ryan's POV) for that community.

This is the first time I've really played hard with Cyril so feedback is appreciated.



SEPARATED

They put me in the room with the little window that opens and closes. I don’t like it here. It’s scary. There are spooky noises and I can’t see outside. I cover my ears but that doesn’t help.

Sometimes the window will open and I run over to it because maybe it’s Ryan outside. And he’ll make everything better. And then the window closes and I’m all by myself. I wanna see my brother so bad. I wanna go back to Emerald City. Please, somebody, get my brother. I need my brother.

I can hear myself screaming his name. “Ryan!”

Comments

[sandrine]

I think your Cyril voice is great. I can imagine is must be hard writing him (Not that I ever tried, because admittedly I never found him all that interesting. *g*) but you did a wonderful job. It definitely sounds like him!

[cmk418]

Cyril's not somebody I'm going to write for on any kind of regular basis, but it's nice to know that it worked.